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All my life has been a shuffe,
cut it now, let's make a deal.
For, my hands can't keep on playing,
to this end is all i feel.

What you have to keep ongoing?
Tel me stranger, times of last.
But, I'm suited man of business,
both our times you follow fast.

'Do you know about my story?'
Asked the soldier, breathing air.
Shady stranger with no answer,
'Better now, we'll play it fair'

First of all, the lose of loved one,
Times of that, I wasn't. Gone.
Lonely wounded walking stranger.
Ace of Hearts, I am alone.

Long before i fell for pardon,
Banner-figter, proudly chose.
Now, the ghosts of my ambition;
Diamond Ace, my thorning rose.

All this time, I was with someone.
Lady luck through all the way.
Living well to self-believing.
Ace of Clubs, she's not today.

But, I don't refuse the happened,
wouldn't showed If was my fear.
Lastly, stranger, hear me closely:
Asce of Spades, the death is here.
The end of the man, this time with the context of a game.

References, almost in every stanza.

Could the reader be gentle and leave their oppinion in here?
Thanks.
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wow
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Randomlyweir Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I suppose It's a posistive-driven surprise? :)
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inkpumpkin Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Absolutley
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